Shaw


 * Clay Shaw **

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__ People who caused Juliet’s death __ Most people know how Juliet died and people say it Friar Lawrence’s fault that she died, because he did not give the letter to Romeo in time. But the real culprits who caused all of this were Lord Capulet and Lady Capulet. Lord Capulet is responsible because he basically was running her marriage and social life. He let her have no friends except for her nurse and never paid attention to her feelings. Lady Capulet is responsible because she would ignore Juliet’s pleads to let her no to be married. She never went into her defense when her father was angry at her and chewing her out. These factors pushed Juliet into faking her death and then actually dying.

Lord Capulet had the biggest effect on Juliet that led to her death was lord Capulet. He ran Juliet’s life and never let her have what she wanted. He was selfish and he made her do what he wanted. This gave her no freedom and she went to drastic measures and risked it all to be with Romeo. Without

I lost my data transferer so this is what I had saved on the computer at school. I will try and find it so I can get my full version up there.

__Comments:__ So far, this sounds pretty solid. I never thought about it this way. This brought some new insight into my mind. Thanks. -Reid Calhoun This is a pretty good essay. You need to redo your thesis sentance. Friar Lawrence was not in charge of giving the letter to Romeo and the most people part is kind of unnecesary.-Robert H

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