Killorin


 * Wylly Killorin **

Romeo and Juliet’s death was foreshadowed from the prologue of the play. Their deaths, while inflicted to themselves, where more contributed by a third-party source. Lord Capulet, Friar Lawrence and Paris brought into the two star-crossed lover’s life by fate. Each one of these persons thinking process was short term and would cripple them in the long run. The first person to blame is Lord Capulet himself. He devised a plan that would eventually doom Paris. Throughout the novel he felt power hungry and the need to be in complete control. While in cahoots with Paris, his exclaimed his plan to Juliet that noted, “But fettle your fine joints ‘ gainst Thursday next, To go with Paris to Saint Peter’s Church,”. Like the butterfly effect, this portion of the plan would destroy the hopes of Romeo and Juliet being united together. This pigheaded man decided that instead of the forced marriage between Juliet and Paris should be in three months, instead to have the date changed to three days. He thought that this rash and quick decision could cure his precious Juliet and heal the wounds that Romeo has branded into her. Friar Lawrence has had a big influence on the death of Romeo and Juliet. He also devised a plan with Juliet to have her fool the House of Capulet into thinking that she was dead. The plan held a few flaws, such as Romeo not being able to arrive in time, the confusion that Romeo would have if the information of the plan was not passed to him. Another flaw that Juliet was most upset about was if she woke up in the cave and found herself alone making her go crazy. Friar Lawrence could also be the main blame for their death, since he was the one who married them, he could have tried to cover up his mistake thinking that this marriage would end the feud. The final blame for the death of Romeo and Juliet death is the Bachelor that Lord Capulet planned for Juliet to marry, Paris. With the help of Lord Capulet, he made the decision to be having a marriage arranged between him and the Capulet’s last living heir. This conflicted with all plans prior. Paris is still ignorant on the fact that Romeo and Juliet have married. The Governor’s son seems to take things too fast, which we know has never had positive consequences, “ Wisely and slow, they stumble that run fast .” He seems very bold and full of him, consuming any connection within the Capulet’s to allow this marriage to happen. In conclusion, each of the characters throughout Romeo and Juliet has done their part in the two lover’s death, yet these three stands out from all the rest. Perhaps it was their own decision that had such an impact on the feud of the Montague’s and the Capulet’s, or perhaps it was Fate.

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__Comments:__ It is a fact not an arguement-Robert H


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__Comments:__ your thesis is about Paris not Romeo and Juliet-Robert H


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__Comments:__ Good paragraph


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__Comments:__ I feel that Paris is not responsible for their death he was just made to marry Juliet by Capulet.- Robert H


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__Comments:__ your thesis is a fact not an arguement-Robert H


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__Comments:__ Good closing but you don't have to say in conclusion-Robert Howell

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