Houk


 * Jack Houk **

//Paste the appropriate portion of your essay in the spaces below. Note: we may not have enough time to post every part of your essay even though there are sections for each.//

In the epic poem __Romeo and Juliet__, By William Shakespeare, Romeo constantly shows lapses in his masculinity throughout the entire book. He is a weak minded man who is easily lured into the trance he is in. He is always at Juliet’s beck and call and has no control over their relationship. He also offers to become a Capulet, the Montague’s mortal enemies. He is an overall sad excuse of a masculine man, and Shakespeare is definitely trying to say that no relationship can last without manliness, but too much and there will be no love, but without it you will surely die from poison. __Comments:__ But he does show masculinity when he kills Tybalt. He sort of snaps out of his trance with Juliet and goes crazy. But then again he does lose his masculinity and Juliet does control most of the relationship. good paragraph. clay
 * __Thesis Statement:__**

For some strange reason I thought we were supposed to be writing ESSAYS. Silly me, I guess I just wasted my time when I obviously could of just writen a paragraph. You have no clear thesis statement and where are your body paragraphs... This is just pitifull.- Henry Quillian

It is a good thesis statement and it poses a valid argument but you need more than just a thesis statement to pass. -Tripp H'Doubler

Many valid points. You have examples, but you don't have any explanation of why that is feminine. -Reid Calhoun
 * __Body Paragraph 1:__**

__Comments:__


 * __Body Paragraph 2:__**

__Comments:__ I really like this paragraph.


 * Body Paragraph 3:**

__Comments:__


 * __Intro:__**

__Comments:__


 * __Conclusion:__**

__Comments:__

Period 4 Home Page

Period 4 Essay Page